Don't think I'll have time to watch Blade Runner tonight (made me so sad). Will do tomorrow or, at the worst, friday. I'm actually really looking forward to it. Also, I need to set aside some time for some serious reading. I've barely made any headway into Phillip K Dick.
On a side note, school. BAH! Really can't stand it. It's to much, except for Literature, if I didn't have that school would be such a drag.
Speaking of Lit. I took a hand at writing a poem. I enjoyed, I might write some more and hope I get a lot better at it.
Here it is, I'd love ot hear your opinions on it:
At its core, it is pedestrian.
Or maybe just something of innocence
Watching from the corner is a Samaritan
Unable to attain the truth of his incompetence.
One man walks away
Into darkness or into light
While the second man simply waits
Lost in his self attained blight.
Fallen from grace and humility
And into corruption
Lost all its humanity
Without a hope of salvation
Or maybe it’s just me,
Lost in this godforsaken nightmare.
Ya know. In hindsight. I shouldn't have called this post Ghost Hunting.
ReplyDeletemeh. there are ghost hunts/tours in the city you can go on.
ReplyDeletefar better poem than i imagined.
ReplyDeletewell done adam :D
Thanks mate. :) But it's not good. Medioce. I mean, asethetically it's fine, it kind of rhytms, the structuring is good but it doesn't feel authentic if you know what I mean. It doesn't feel like there is an emotional backing to it. It's written like some afterthought not an emotion. Well, actually thats the problem with it, it's written but not felt.
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